denmark
September 29, 2012
when I dropped the shell
the waves crashed
a stained-glass sea
drowned
the white noise
of slow acceleration
blood bled thick
from a heart as pure
as a memory of snow
in summer
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Brilliant! Well written 🙂
Beautiful…an amazing piece and I could feel the emotion through your use imagery. Love it!
-Eva
when I dropped the shell, the waves crashed
incredible imagery. This is rich, Peter. It feels melancholic, a little sad but willing to see the beauty.
ha some really cool contradicitons and contrasts in this….but then again it adds to the feel….
Denmark – (I think of a certain prince.) This has a very northern melancholic aspect, well done. k.
Wonderful imagery.
Anna :o]